Posted by danthro (Suburbia, United States) on 28 April 2008 in Transportation and Portfolio.
processing suggestions? feel like i should've done something more, but not sure what...
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I see the grass is green in your area. What a nice bike path. Your color is exceptional.
28 Apr 2008 6:11pm
Here's what works for me ... I scrolled down just slightly from the top of the image - just to where the path begins to disappear over the hill and the building to the right is gone ... for me that makes all the difference. I guess I could have said "crop the top 1/5 off the image" and that would have been more a bit more direct ... oh well.
28 Apr 2008 6:15pm
@Ron: you're right. great suggestion! thanks!
great shot .. good colors (bji kurd ) :)
28 Apr 2008 12:52am
I think it´s good like it is,you can almost feel the steep slope of the hill.
28 Apr 2008 2:05am
Getting someone to be there riding against the arrows woulda lifted it!
28 Apr 2008 4:05am
This shot has an ominous feel to it. Like I keep expecting some cloaked figure to come riding over the horizon on his death bike carrying torch and scythe.
28 Apr 2008 4:42am
Nice angle
28 Apr 2008 9:00am
You appear to be heading in the right direction. Fun image.
28 Apr 2008 9:21am
Great shot, like the curving walkway and how it leads you into this picture. Interesting decal.
28 Apr 2008 10:37am
I like the curve and the framing
28 Apr 2008 10:54am
A great curve and rise to the pathway and I like the way the bike stencil looks like it glows. A great shot.
28 Apr 2008 11:37am
No as it is, the bike stands out realy nice.
28 Apr 2008 12:17pm
great shot, nice DOF , I love the lines in this one
28 Apr 2008 12:38pm
Maybe somebody lying on the path, positioned like a bike rider over the stencil...?
28 Apr 2008 1:00pm
nice shot
28 Apr 2008 2:18pm
I'd like to see someone going against the grain, you know, 'cause it's less pedaling.
28 Apr 2008 3:30pm
Nice work here, can't think what else you could have done to add to it any more.
28 Apr 2008 5:12pm
I agree with Richard about the processing; it's fine how it is. I really like the curve. Nice composition.
28 Apr 2008 6:19pm
Great perspective shot. I love the colours contrast!
28 Apr 2008 6:43pm
Very cool shot! Great perspective too.
28 Apr 2008 11:15pm
If it was me, I wouldn't crop the building. It seems balanced like it is to me. But I might crop a little off the bottom to decenter the bike icon. I like the "floating" appearance of it.
30 Apr 2008 11:19am
I'd try cropping the building (as Ron suggested) and maybe crop the bottom very slightly to pull the bike symbol to about 1/3 of the way up. it's a good shot now but somehow not quite balanced.
... another alternative would be to widen it out and show even more of the building. that would have a very different effect.
1 May 2008 8:35pm
I agree with baobab about cropping both atop and bottom and put the bike on the bottom right third. Its a great picture though. Did you use flash to get the bike so bright?
Dan
4 May 2008 12:25pm
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